invisible, taking my white dress off…

I jump out your lips,

and sway with the wind, for I

left a mark in you.


~ by saikow on December 9, 2007.

6 Responses to “invisible, taking my white dress off…”

  1. i’m thinking of a little creature who silently goes into one’s mouth at night..


  2. nashock na ko sa readings sa uban nga mga tao… lingawa oi… each person has a diff perception on this piece… in short, it DOESNT WORK! hahahaha… im not going to say pa kung about saan to… read me, bae friends, and criticize!!! 🙂

  3. What is that creature? a fly? eeww…. i do hope, it’s not. I would rather think its a mosquito.
    anyway, good image mars. although you did not directly mentioned about the creature, it suggests and captures the very moment it jumped out the lips and swayed with the wind.
    I cant imagine it would happen to me, though.

  4. kiss gud ako ma-imagine… or is it just me?

    “and sway with the wind, for I

    left a mark in you.”——meaning na-happy ka?

    is that it? uhmm.. i don’t need to ask you…hehe it’s my own interpretation,anyway! 🙂

  5. ghastly something gud maisip ko..
    uhmm murag soul?huh!reincarnation kaya..
    then leaving that body with a shit virus
    or something which causes disease..
    uhm marius, nagawork man xa, it still has an
    image, it has an abstraction,
    kaya lang medjo kulang lang sa [csd]..=)

  6. hmmm… REWRITE!!! nga pla, try clicking my name na, it works na… this is marius, by the way… 🙂

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